1. Find a news story or celebrity similar to the myth.

Themyth that I choose a celebrity about was Narcissus. The celebritythat I chose that I think most represents Narcissus is Heidi Montag.I choose her because last year, she had 10 plastic surgeries in oneday to make herself look better. Narcissus who is so beautiful diedbecause he liked to look at himself. The plastic surgeries made HeidiMontag lookbetter in her eyes because she wasn't beautiful enough. So shechanged herself to be more beautifulso she could look at herself in the mirror all day. Below is thelink to her storyof plastic surgery.


http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2010/01/13/entertainment/main6092609.shtml

2. Create a comic retelling a myth. I choose Ali Baba.
Here is the link: http://www.bitstrips.com/user/223554/read.php?comic_id=1096156&sc=1

3. Create a poem alluding to a myth.

MyBride-to-Be


Thevigorous hours of labor

Butall the effort worked in my favor

Herlifelessness overwhelmed me

Thereshe stood

MyBride-to-Be


Thewaxy ivory glistening in the sun

OI wish she could breed me a son

AsI scamper closer to her lifeless self

Iwould give anything for her

Evenwealth

MyBride-to-Be


Iplead and plead to the one that could give her life

PLEASEPLEASE!!

Makeher my wife

Thewise Venus took mercy on me

Thensaid here is your

Bride-to-Be


Theivory, lifeless figure that I once owned

Sprangto life to come to our home

Shebreed me a son and brought me life

Shefinally rid me of all strifes

OhFINALLY FINALLY

Ihave my

Bride-to-Be






Guess which myth I alluded to!!

Thank you! -Jaelyn J.   thier

2/4/2011 12:17:53 am

Don't know if it's a website error but you need to space out the words or find out a solution why they aren't spaced correctly. Use puncuation, great flow to the poem overall. Spelled "Oh" "O" by accident. Spelling errors, and when you said "Sprang to life to come to our home," wasn't she allready 'home'? Hence, being a statue that couldn't move, and spelled "bred" "breed" by accident.

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2/4/2011 12:23:19 am

Spelled "chose "choose", and the assignment wasn't specifically about a 'celebrity.' Just someone who had similar characteristics as a mythical character in the books we read. In my opinion the first sentence isn't needed. When you said "The plastic surgeries made HeidiMontag lookbetter in her eyes because she wasn't beautiful enough." you need to be more specific because you make it seem like she wasn't beautiful in the first place or need to state that she did it because she thought that she needed the improvements to her body, and you should provide more links, 2-4 would be more appropriate to back your information up even though a large part sounds like opinion. (sorry for double-post)

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Rebecca Phan
2/4/2011 01:17:36 am

For the article: I think it was an mediorce comparison because Heidi Montag didn't think she was pretty enough so she had to get plastic surgery to make herself more beautiful unlike Narcisst who thought he was already the best.

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2/5/2011 01:31:39 am

Brandon- I have no idea what happened with the spacing. I guess it was a website error. And I edited out all of the spelling errors out but I accidentally posted the unedited one. Also I just copied what Ms.Miller put on the website which was "Find a news story or celebrity similar to the myth." And the sentence where I said "The plastic surgeries made Heidi Montag look better in her eyes because she wasn't beautiful enough.", I thought it was implied that I meant in her eyes not mine. Anyway thanks for the great tips. You are great at constructive commenting. :)

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2/5/2011 01:34:43 am

Rebecca- I meant to add in that she was obsessed with herself at the beginning of the comparison but I forgot. It was stated in the article that I linked. Thanks for the constructive comment!

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Ms. Miller
2/28/2011 04:24:44 am

I'm so glad you replied to your commenters. They provided great feedback. 100% for the Narcissus connection.

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